I’m working on a english discussion question and need support to help me learn.

respond to the student’s statements with facts or opinions

1)This week I learned that using different steps and methods to revise our paper is very important. One of the things that I found interesting was to take a break from your rough draft. Once our mind is clear, that’s when it’s a good time to go back and revisit your paper. Having a clear mind helps reading your paper over and helping you find the flaws and mistakes.

I found that one of my strengths was that once I started writing I did pretty well at keeping a good pace in writing. Something I feel I can use some help on is just getting started, even with an outline, at time I find it difficult as to where to start on my writing.

I will be using the techniques that we learned about this week to help refine my paper. I will have a few different people read it and get their opinion as to where I can improve. I will also read it out loud to myself to see if it makes sense and sound grammatically correct.

2)Honestly I have learned that revision is a good thing. Letting several other people read your paper is very helpful because you don’t always see things that need to be changed or revised. I have a hard time with this just because I don’t write well and having someone else read my work is hard. So it’s definitely a learning process for me.

I feel my areas of strength is writing my opinion because I am not afraid to put my own opinion or words out there. My areas that need work are organizing the paper better and citing my resources because it’s a little confusing to me about what needs to be where.

I will definitely take all the feed back from all my classmates and teacher and apply it to my paper. I will also work a little harder in the areas I need improvement on, so that I make sure it’s correct. I hope to submit a decent read paper that the readers will enjoy and possibly change there opinion on my topic.

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